Saturday, April 15, 2006

Crappy Sentence of the Day:

"He moved smoothly into a defensive defense stance."

This is why I do line edits.

2 comments so far. What are your thoughts?

La Gringa said...

Coulda been worse. Coulda been "He moved smoothly into a smooth defensive defense stance."


Ledasmom said...

Or "He moved smoothly into a defensive and smooth defensive stance of defense."
And then he fell over from the weight of the modifiers, and they did feast upon him.